Last Night

by xXxSurrenderToMyWrathxXx   Aug 2, 2007


I lay in my room
Face down on the floor
I am not moving
I can't anymore

I hear all the voices
Screaming and crying in my ears
Rolling down my face
Are dreadful death tears

I try to get up
But I'm no longer strong enough
I'll always be weak
I can never be tough

The horrible thought
Of what happened last night
Staring into darkness
Not one stream of light

What happened last night
Will remain a mystery
So I lay here on the floor
For all eternity

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  • 16 years ago

    by StillxBreathing

    This one was very powerful and well done. You're really good at showing emotions through your poems. -claire

  • 16 years ago

    by kendra

    Lovely.

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Wow!! I love this. Beautiful pictures (well not nice but very descriptive) and so much emotion. I loved the ending. 5/5 all the way. GREAT job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mary

    Great pome very mysterious and it shows lots of feelings. I love it keep up the good work.

    If you have time plz chek out some of my pomes "Sakos Story" and " a poem to my cuzen"

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    Very good
    Very good rhythm and rhyming.
    I think it is very deep and good.

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