A Puppies Thrill. (Senryu)

by Crystal Gaze   Aug 3, 2007


Peanut butter jar
rolling across the cold floor
Bandit barks again.

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My puppy was barking and batting this peanut butter jar across the floor, he look absolutely adorable so i decided to write about him, and him funny puppy ways.
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Thanks,
Elaine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was cute. I loved it.
    well done
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Puppies barking at the strangest things.. it's so adorable! I love how animals will freak out over something odd, especially puppies and kitties... Another simple poem but very good non the less.

    5/5 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very unique and creative poem reflecting your versatility. Well done

    tc
    Fsams 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    How adorable. There's only so much that can be said poetically about a senyru due to it's length, or lack of, but I think you used the form well. All the aspects and qualities of senyru which I won't go into detail about because I know you know, were there. Also, the subject was heart warming. I could picture the playful scene. It really did make me go "aww." Keep writing!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Aww it was cute, i liked it, great job. good write.

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