Comments : Twisted Fate

  • 12 years ago

    by Mo

    Wow - I started to read that and got a bit confused half way through as to who "she" and "I" was - I was thinking you were just swapping from first to third person but accident - but then at the end I realised what was going on.

    Good twist.

    Liked it.


  • 12 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    It was a very twisted piece, Some of it made sense and parts didn't , but it fell together at the end, I liked that, It flowed pretty good, but it was a bit inconstistant, It was one of those poems that got me thinking about life, and the irony in it, Good work, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    This is the best poem
    the way its written is more sophisticated and elegant
    i liked the kind of twist at the end as well

  • 12 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow, that was an amazing write! a very twisted peice. The ending really turned over the whole poem, and showed some real depth. Your words were incredible, they really lead you to see this scared and unknown image. I loved the crystaline tear imagery. thought that gave the poem a nice touch.

  • 12 years ago

    by Nix

    It is interesting, very original. You end this piece in your personal style which is great. I like the atmosphere, it is haunting. All of your poems are excellent. 5/5