To Brighten Your Smile

by Rachel   Aug 7, 2007


Unfailing to seek the real me
The best in you is all I see

When we met you took my cares
And to this day your love still shares

I hope you feel the same way I do
Cause hun I'm so in love with you

I hope our love will last for ages
With you love has no grievous wages

If you want to take it slow
No prob hun, that's the way we'll go

We can take our love in stages
I write you letters on diary pages

With decorated designs on the sides
Of hearts and flowers and ocean tides

That I draw as I think of the words to say
To brighten your smile on a gloomy day

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  • 16 years ago

    by Clown

    It was very sweet and well writtin. Who ever this is for is very lucky.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Nice work... it's soo beautiful!

  • 18 years ago

    by TwilightSecrets

    Aww it made a beautiful little slide show in my mind, am i too mushy? haha maybe a little It was really nice. 5/5

    Emza ^.-

  • 18 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    it kinda bit of sad! bit its okay. Good right. this one have a different style..

    keep on writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    That was beautiful.

    The poem in itself was rather simple, and didn't require a lot of thinking. But it was a -very- nice idea, and I'm sure it will brighten the smile of whomever it was meant for.

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