BAD FRIEND

by MARI   Aug 8, 2007


I'M SO TIRED OF ALWAYS IT BEING MY FAULT
ITS NEVER YOURS CAUSE UR SO PERFECT
I'M SO TIRED OF CRYING OVER U I KNOW U SAY U CRY TO BUT THERE JUST TEARS OF LAUGHTER!
HOW CAN U NOT CARE ABOUT A PERSON WHO HAS BEEN WITH U EVERYDAY WHO CARED FOR YOU
BUT I'M DONE I'M SICK AND TIRED OF BEGGING
I'M TIRED OF TRYING TO MAKE SOMETHING WORK THAT WILL NEVER WORK! I CAN EXPLAIN TO YOU HOW MUCH U HAVE HURT IT HURTS SO MUCH TO SEE A GOOD FRIENDSHIP JUST LOST AND NEVER IT WILL BE FOUND I DONT CARE ANYMORE GO UR WAY AND ILL GO MINE SEE WHO WILL CARE FOR A TWO FACE FRIEND!! I'M DONE AND IT WILL HURT BUT I'M SURE I WILL FIND A REAL FRIEND SOMEDAY
I'M DONE AND IT WILL COME BACK TO YOU SOMEDAY!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Aish

    Wow-this is really carrying alot of emotion!!!!!!!!!

    A couple of spelling errors-but im sure you dont want to worry too much about that.

    Might be a couple of places where you could have strted a new line-maybe start each point on a new line-i dunno some seem to get loost in each other.

    But im still gunna give it 5/5 cos of how strong it is!

    Aish

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    Real friends are hard to come by,they are out there though just don't give up looking.ver emotion filled write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darya

    Really good job
    i can really feel the anger in it
    great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by shanaynay

    Love the way you expressed your feelings!

    keep it up ;]

    ♥
    Shaina

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna

    I really like the anger...it was very good. 5/5!

    BabyGurl

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