How many nights you want me to spend?
With this so called love pain; silently.
Imagine just one sleepless night,
How it feels? Answer me honestly.

that is my boy right here, the best poem stanza i ever read, and it is written by my home boy, i am so happy, and sad becasue you sound sad.
I love you goran, keep writing what you feel.

Awe..This is so sweet. You have always been magnificent in writing love poems. I loved this one. I loved the rhythm of it and the whole meaning of it. You are a great writer. Keep up the good work.

I admire the simplicity of each words used in your poem coz beyond that simplicity the emotions were really screaming for one love to be back, for anguish and loneliness to mend...wow amazing!! I can feel your grief. another great work! keep it up

WOW! thats so deep. i loved it this was a beautiful poem i could read it over and over it showed so much emotion! i mean it! i loved it i seriosuly am gonna add it to my favorites it like shakspear writitng! every word leans on you, you can feel the emotion the pain!

I like the ideas in this poem. Comparing your love to the moon, as a beautiful but unattaineable object, was really good. I think there are places where you should check your tenses, because you're using the right root words, but the declentions are not quite correct. If you have a friend with a good grasp on language and grammar, I think their help would really benefit this poem. The feeling and sentiment is all there, and some polishing could make it shine.

Hmm, now. You sent me a message saying "I am willing to do anything in return [for reading this poem], just ask for it." If you're willing to stick to that, my wish would be that you look through this site until you find a rather unknown writer who you think has real potential, and give them a good critique of some of their work. : ) You're already rather established, and you could help others on their way! Good luck with your writing, Goran.

-Sibyllene

Oh..wow..this is such a beautiful poem..I really like it..the emotions, very well written..5/5

I loved it. It was so true and honest. That was worth it to read! 5/5

Oh, what a heartfelt poem this is. So sad and so beautiful. I love the comparisons and metaphors. You have great talent for expressing your feelings of love and heartache in poetry. 5/5

marcella

I thought the poem was written very well, the imagery was fantastic so was the flow and the words were very heatfelt. I only wish I could have seen the poem through your eyes so I'd know exactly how important it is. Amazing job 5/5 GG23

I wanted to cry. It was so raw and emotional. Wow. Not many people can really make me come close to tears, but this one did it. Gosh, this was really heartbreaking! :[[
Great job and I can see why it was rated 5/5.
Ciao<3

Very enjoyable read with a lovely choice of words the flow needs a little work except for this it's a very thought provoking read and I will be sure to read more of your work from now on.

Well I like the symbolism in this poem.. Planet = life (Correct me if I'm wrong)
I think it flowed nicely, Well.. I can feel your emotions in your words..

You are not in my planet like before.
Similar to the moon in the sky,
^^That is really good..

*3rd stanza is my favorite..*

Overall.. A beautiful poem!
5/5 as always.

You employed a beautiful figurative language that never failed to endear this piece to me. Though it flowed oddly on certain places, it managed to capture my heart with the sentiments of loss, heartache and longing. I wished I could write wonderfully as you: your simplicity and sincerity on your composition truly captivated me.

"Don't get lost in your own world,
We can share the same planet, I am sure."

^ Aha, a couplet which I could correlate with! It's so similar with my inner yearning for an unrequited love to be returned (though yours were fortunately returned). Very poignant.

All the best and take care,
Marian

I love this poem... it's beautiful as all of your poems are... i hope you're doing ok, i love the poem still, it's a great write just like it always is. amazing.

Goran,
Thats so deep!
The emotion's laced through this peice had me in tear's on the first stanza. The flow was nice along with the wording.
Overall it was a really heartfelt poem, with the touch of sweetness.

And excellent read,
Well done 5/5,
Elaine.

'Imagine just one sleepless night,
How it feels? Answer me honestly.'
^^Fantastic wording, really sets the mood. A joy to read. The imagery was amazing and very thought provoking.

Love Greta

Astronomic passion delivered as only you can

Nice the flow was a little off but the expression of feelings was all right well done :)

Sweet poem, filled with love. I love how you answered questions. That caught my attention. The flow of the poem was great and the rhyming was good as well and did not seem forced. 5/5

Shannon <3

Excellent poem...the wording is great and the rhyming is on point the whole way through.... its such a beautifully written poem...i could almost feel the pain of needing love back.... amazing job! 5/5 from me.