Wow.. I really loved this poem! I can relate to it, like most little girls I loved the fairy tales, and stories about Princesses finding their Prince. I wish someday I can become a Cinderella like the girl in this poem and find my Prince Charming.. wouldn't that be the day? =)
Your poem is neat and organized.. I like that, it makes the poem look better and a lot more professional. You don't want to read a poem with words and lines scattered everywhere. You also didn't leave the reader confused.
Great job! Keep up the good work.. I hope to read more from you soon! 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~

Sometimes I think every girl is a Cinderella no matter who they are or what they look like....(that so inspired a poem out of me!!)....and sometimes woman get too desperate or just settle for someone "good enough" that they never find the REAL man...because there are some out there...you have to look hard....

This poem was adorable...wonderful feeling isn't it? To find that guy who brings out the best in you?! Glad you have that! I enjoyed this!
Chelsey

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Alright job, the topic was a little cliched and the rhyme a little forced at times, but it was pretty good overall. Keep writing!

Lovely writting there really did like your style and it almost is the begginning the background feelings to my poem called this prince!

Great poem...Can relate. Keep it up!

Well I like the structure of this poem, I like the repetition of the first stanza to the last stanza.

I think it's every girl's dream to be a princess.. and be rescued my her Prince/Knight.

Good job.

Awwww such a sweet poem...nice job...

as soon as i read the first stanza i knew it would be a great poem...the beginning really captured my attention and of course the ending was amazing because the beginning and end were my favorite lines.

great poem.5/5 from me again.

You write alot of poems about love but it suits you u write them very well 5/5

This is a very sweet poem. The flow was a little off and all the "&" are a little distracting, but still a great piece nonetheless. A beautiful love poem. 5/5

marcella

Wow this is poem is amazing well done
xx

Amazing poem
keep it up!

LOVE IT!!

This is rreeeaaaallllyyyyy good. =] It has soo much meaning...I love it. <3