Cold Sunday

by sav   Aug 12, 2007


Dear Never,
I remember how you would laugh
at all the dumb things i said
but you failed to recognize
all those things were meant

They say first loves never die
I wish I knew that from the start
But I would've been breathing a lie
if i had never met your heart

fate and destiny have their wierd ways
of saying you'll get what you want
if you just wait

And when I'm with him
I know I'm in real love
I want to thank you for proving
I wasn't good enough

Because after that cold sunday
bright and early in the morning
a stranger called to say hey
and that I'm the one worth loving<3

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  • 18 years ago

    by MissAlyssaGraff

    That is SO cute,
    and EXTREMELY original.

    I love how you started it as
    'Dear Never,'

    And I like how you didnt capitilize the i's, it makes it more.. freestyle!
    Well great job!

    5/5

    -Alyssa.xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a good poem, I think it flowed well. You have some minor errors.. Just capitalize all the I's =)