Thought provoking but i have to ask why the church theme? :)

This is a very nicely written perfect poem, keep it up dear.......

I like this although you said it was your first poem about life written from the heart I always took this as something you had to have been through to be written fro the heart this seams an unlikly circumstance to be in I may have got the wrong end of the stick here either way it was very nicly written.

Great poem. Nicely written. I loved the message and the idea of the poem being about perfectionists. Very nice. The poem also flowed nicely and it was very powerful.

-Shannon <3

Great poem.,. Good choice of words.. Flowed well too...
You told your message perfectly.. I hope a perfectionist read your poem, so they can realize what they've done..
Well done.. 5/5

Great message! I liked the originality of the concept here. Wonderful choice of words too. I wouldn't usually think of figures of religoin as perfectionists but, I understand the point. I guess it's more as you wanted to point out how they have strong beliefs and might try to "push" them onto others and if everyone believed this way they would be perfect. Um, I don't even know if I understood what I wrote lol. Nonetheless this was a great piece. 5/5

marcella

I like the message nice poem 4/5

Yes, it doesn't matter who you are, you shouldn't criticize someone for making a mistake when hell knows we all make mistakes.. Nobody is perfect in any shape or form, nice job =)

I think it was a fine written piece, I really like the theme of this poem, I think it was unique, good job. What I don't lik in this poem is.. I think it lacks punctuations. (but maybe it's just me)

Nonetheless it was a great poem.

Wow this is great....i really like it.

the message of this is important and it really got across...i give you props for this one.

5/5 from me.

I loved it, the words you chose....so original. So meaningful, they sparked wonderful images, they really brought out your idea and made me understand the metaphor. It was great, I loved it alot.

I agree nobody's perfect! i was impressed theres a lot of very meaningful words in this poem great one5/5

I agree 100% no one is perfect. but this poem is very near perfect. it is absolutely wonderfully written and it speaks the truth. well done. 5/5

Kalee

I agree with this poem, ive been cast into its harsh reality