A Picture Says 1000 Words

by Karin Erlacher   Aug 14, 2007


The wind was blowing

The sky was so blue

The water was flowing

There's a girl and you

You look so content

With her in your arms

I'm not sure if you meant

To cause me any harm

That time it hurt

To look at your eyes

You with no shirt

You look pure, no lies

You'll say it's nothing

But pictures don't lie

It's hard not to think

You're a typical guy

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Interesting poem. I wish you used rhyming words that were a little more complex but that's just me. I know a girl that's the exact oposite and likes simple words. You were consistant in rhyming and you got the message across. I'm not usually big on love poems because they all seem to sound alike. I'll give it a three so the rating goes down to a four point something.

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Your poem's are consistent, in spacing out the line's.
    your flow is amazing,and the rymthes likewise.
    Your very talented,
    Keep it up
    Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Beautiful poem. All your poems flow so nicely. The rhyming was good too and did not seem forced at all. 5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    I thought the poem would be diffrent that what it was i really enjoyed it! the flow was good and you used strong words!

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