Heyy sweetie. i love this poem. Its so meaningful and has such power and emotion in it. love it hunz
xoxo jessie

Aww, really good. There are times when I feel the same way. Keep standin' and writing !

I really liked this one ^_^ The flow was Fantastic and the wording was great ^_^ I give this one a perfect 5 =)
Rhea

Ang galing nyo rin po.....the flow is really nice...i feel the same way also especially when hard times come in my life....but
i know I can surpass these problems naman....

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Awww, such a sad poem. i will give you 5

Hey =)

i think you did really well in this poem, especially for a beginner. I jus have one thing that i'd like to pick on if thats ok... I think slang words in poetry kind of degrades the idea and the meaning behind it. But other then that, you did so well.

Niquee xox

In every poem I make,
there's is reason why i take
because of silence I want to break,
that in my poem's I can erase.

I think this is a really great poem. Poetry can break an everlasting silence, expression gives us a voice.

Take Care.

I am really happy to read your poems again and again and comment....
Good job expressing in a better form. Keep writing.

Nazeer

Beautiful and the message is very clear. The way redundancy is used, its positive and I liked it. Keep up the good work. You are on the right track 5/5

Tc
Fsams

I am really happy to read your poems again and again and comment....
Good job expressing in a better form. Keep writing.

Nazeer

I loved the emotion and depth you used in this, it is easily sensed by the reader.
The only suggestion I have with this is try to eliminate some of the fillers (I, and, the etc) as a lot of the time it can make the flow so much better.
Apart from that, I enjoyed this.

I can relate to this poem.
I like the subject of this one, it's very original. The last stanza is my favorite. I don't like the third stanza, I feel like it don't quite fit in the whole poem. 4/5 from me

NOW THIS ONE=).. well it is very sad but I like the flow, and the words.. it is nicely penned..5/5..your friend...Melody..=)

Yet another sweet poem..... keep up the best writing as well as its expressions..

Nazeer

Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5
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Nazeer

ConfirM yr expressionS arE mucH pleasinG.. welL donE.... regardS 5/5

luzaN

HonestlY speakinG, i luV thE stylE oF yR writingS N therE iS a speciaL outlooK... keeP uP yR writinG... i likE iT... 5/5

luzaN

SILENCE ... a killer for most people. I like your take on this one and the last stanza was my favourite. Nice write.

You were looking for improvement. I'd drop some of the slang (wanna) and replace with "want" in the 3rd stanza.

Beautifully written

Hope <3

A very sorrowful piece of poem that is expressed beautifully...