Comments : Silence

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I like how the main focus on this poem was "silence", and how it can be such a horrible thing. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting, it is original and you wrote this piece greatly. First two stanzas are the greatest. You created haunting atmosphere, and I can hear that silence!

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    This is the best so far really good :)
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I like the style of this one, the silience can be unbearable, or it can be a blessing, the flow is god, the emotion is strong, to make it better instead of using words like wanna use want. Other than that this was a perecrt penned poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Short but too descriptive on every end..keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    I feel like that all the time and want 2 b alone cuz i believe that it will make it betta but it doesnt :P

    it was a great poem, great work :)