Joy

by LURVE   Aug 14, 2007


JOY is sitting in her room.
Just sitting and doing nothing but that.
She is so lonely because she's home alone.

Suddenly she notice that she doesn't feel a thing.
She can't feel her heart beat,
Her hand move, or even her eye close.
She feels like she's paralyzed.
Like she isn't even alive anymore.
She sees her body, but her soul is not in it.
Just spirit floating above that pretty looking girl.
Girls lips are turning blue, skin is getting whiter
and she seems to get smaller and smaller.

Her spirit realized that is over with her life,
She fell asleep forever,
That she ain't gonna wake up anymore,
In her own bed, surrounded by her family and friends.
Her time on earth has past,
now she has to move on the other side,
to a better place, of pure happiness.

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  • 16 years ago

    by njabulo b

    Oops! a great poem my friend- i like your imagination yet i feel sympathetic- if i read it at the last stanza but yes, its the fate and aslo its true- something we all waiting for- great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Woo-hooo
    Awesome dear
    Loved it fully and completely
    Keep writing and dont blush others by saying your poems aint good in your profile
    This one is rocking
    5/5
    your friend
    Rohan

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    This is a very good poem.
    I like how you discribed it.
    Nicely done.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Beautiful writings..
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    Marvelous outlooks..
    Fantastic feelings..
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    Write more, feel more and be with me for reading and commenting.. I like your poems very much indeed... 5/5

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    Nazeer

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