Im sorry mum i really did love you

by jasmine   Aug 14, 2007


The water creeps up the side of the car
the binds pull me under i start seeing stars
im sorry mum i didnt listen to what you said
its my fault my friends are dead
i drove the car at a reckless speed
all coz i thought it was cool to smoke weed
and now in the river
i dont want to say good bye
im scared mum i dont want to die
im promise ill listen if you spare my life
i know ive caused you so much pain and strife
but mum the waters over my head
i know that i will soon be dead
please tell my friends parents im sorry
tell them im dead so they wont need to worry
about making me pay for the things that i did
but it wasnt all my fault there were other kids
im breathing in water now mum
ive finally realised my life is done
im sorry mum i really did love you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lost in Life

    This is deep its really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Wow that really got me

  • 16 years ago

    by Treshawna

    Wow! reading this a tear came to my eyes.

    this could not have been written better

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    That actually brought tears to my eyes. its really emotional. its a very good poem. i hope all is ok xxxxxxxxxx