I Will Succeed

by Aaron Deevers   Aug 15, 2007


Everyday I wish
Wish to see the day
The day you see
That I have succeeded

Let it be
Be a reminder
A reminder to never lead
Never lead with pressure
Pressure that one-day
Will lead to failure

You watch as I make a difference
A difference that one-day
One-day will make you say
Why did I pressure
Pressure such a leader

It will come to you
To you that I was better
Better to be in the long run of life
Let it be a reminder that
That we will have our day

Never pressure
Never fear
Never let one person
One-person change that you want to be
One-day they will see
See that you were to be
To be the one to succeed

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& Maybe You'll Get One In Return~~

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  • 16 years ago

    by cassanova

    I got a poem similar but i grew up in a city its called my life check it out and tell me what you think

  • 16 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    Another great one!! is it even possible for you to write a bad poem? lol i don't think it is

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    I really liked the style of the poem, how on alot of the lines you used the end word to begin the next line. It made the poem unique overall. If you believe in yourself, then you can acheive. Great poem:)

    Take Care.