Stentch Of Remorse (Group Title Toss)

by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©   Aug 15, 2007


I Photographed a Frame Of You
Your Finger painted Smile
The Intangible Nothingness
Shadowed By Denial

Those Beautiful Broken Bones
Upon a Weightless Kiss
The Beautiful Way I Broke Your Heart
When I Told You This Was It

You Stood Beside Me Faithfully
Aware I Wasn't True
I Empathize Looking Back
Of The Things I Did To You

Shall I Interrupt Your Life
The One You've Built Alone
The One I Yearn To Have Again
The One My Heart Did Own

I Would Love To Talk To You
Perhaps You Can Forgive
The One True Love Of Your Life
And The Damage That Shes Did

You See My Life Is Broken Now
Your Memory Stunts Its Course
One Night Of Infidelity
Haunted By Remorse

-Its Not My Best But It Sure Was Fun

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  • 16 years ago

    by Laura

    This poem brought about feelings of sadness and anager for me....i know what it is like to be the one who has a mate be unfaithful.
    however there is a good mixture of remorse within this write. the flow was flawless and the rhymes were not forced. overall very well written..
    altho i have a few suggestions...

    this line felt like it read a lil awkward
    'Aware I Was Wasn't True' maybe if yu take out one of the 'was'

    and for this line i would suggest removing the 's' from the word shes

    'And The Damage That Shes Did'

    but it was a fantastic write and enjoyable read!

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