PleasurE iN farminG

by Shirani Graham   Aug 15, 2007


MY countrY iS destineD foR...........farminG
thiS joB giveS showeR oF............ charminG
workinG iN fieldS neveR goeS.......harminG
iN summeR operatioN iS noT sO....warminG
farminG giveS pleasurE durinG.... morninG

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  • 16 years ago

    by rain

    It's unique in it's only way
    i give it a 5/5
    you have a mind no one else has
    if there was a star scale of 1-10 in creativity i would give you infinite stars
    =]
    a true gift you have

  • 16 years ago

    by chelsea

    Hiiii!!! nice poem, infact very nice poem. i feel like farming right now =). infact i think everyone should farm. =)

    NAZEER

  • 16 years ago

    by Sam Azam

    Nice style, original topic. And how very right you are, I think NZ is a beautiful country =) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by doug frazier

    An interesting style of writing, I can see that the writer was in pursuit of the idea of a nice rhyming poem. Keep writing, spreading joy and learning the styles that are out here on the site. well done! Doug

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Luzan great work and specialy the flowing of word was great. very easy to read for reader. i loved your writing style. '
    5/5