by the song writer Aug 15, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
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(this is a song, not an authentic poem. There will be a chorus.) |
by Nix
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It is very interesting and it has good flow. I like the idea of whole poem and it is also original. You wrote it in a good way, very singable. |
by The Undoing
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That gave me gooseumps, it was really good. Well done =) |
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This is a great song! i would really like to hear it with music!!! 5/5 |