Comments : Can't Stand It

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Hey this is a good poem nice read!

    but badness and sick people have always existed its just in this world now we have the technology to report it but its always happened!

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I totally know what you mean i cant stand it either 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    Laura,, this poem is so great... So touched.. Reading this work almost made me cry.. :(
    You made me realize how damaged and broken this world is.. It's just.. wonderful piece...
    Every stanza has very strong emotion...
    The best poem about life i read so far.. Really... :)
    Well done.. Keep up the good work.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW you sum the world all up in just a few words
    powerful poem there. wonderfully written and word choice was great, thanks for your comments , excellent write, proud of you, keep it up,,, your friend Tracy d....................................5/5

    P.S good to see you back FRIEND

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    A whole stream of events issues from the decision Raising in one's favor all manner Of unforeseen incidents and meetings And material assistance, Which no one could have dreamt Would have come this way. I agree with Adel; "The life tells a hundred truths to one lie. It has to, to make the lie good for anything." Beautiful expressed penned you portrait here, "As water is to a flower, So is praise to the heart of another."

    Anyway, thanks for your nice comment, I very appreciated, take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Laura
    What a great piece you have penned. The world is becoming such a bad place to be.
    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    This poem is outstanding. i have no words for how great it is. 10/10!! keep up the great work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5.You have depicted a very true picture of todays world.People are turning materialistic,moral values have no place.Each one of us have to awaken and take a step to make this world a beautiful place to live in.God bless.

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    I like writing about life..I relate to this one..in reality people became greed of power they hunger for money this poem suit our world today..great job keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    An amazing poem
    i completely get it.
    nd i totally agree.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie

    I totally agree man. this world has so much it needs to fixed. i really dig your poem a lot and i love your writing style. 5/5. really good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Sadly it is a cruel world :( when this should be heaven for everyone, the angers is so right in this poem and so is the feeling of hoplesness :) it gets a 5/5 from me well done :)

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    Great poem ^_^ reality.......5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is a really good poem, and its 100% true which adds to the affect.
    you have a lot of talent.
    take care x.o.x

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    I completely agree with you. this is a great poem. 5/5
    <3 sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by LURVE

    Nice!, it's totally true, what are you saying about world around us! really, great!

  • 16 years ago

    by LovelyDivine

    This was excellent. it really tells of how things really are. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Hearted

    Great i loved it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow hunny so pretty and real poem. I loved the wordings and the flow is also cool. The structure is perfect and I simply love love love the starting. 10/10 u know why?? Coz I voted twice ( Its nominated :) )

    Tc Misve
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. you must have taking alot of time to think of this poem, it was so honest and true on how the world is.

    it was beautifully written and unbelievably greatly expressed, nice work, keep it up!!!!!!! 5/5