This is a really good poem,i know how it feels to lose someone close to you and it hurts.
you did an excellent job putting down your feelings.5/5

Wow i love this poem, goodjob and im so sorry for your loss, your poem was beautiful

This truly is a heart-filled poem.
my grandmother died a month ago, it sucks.

I really enjoyed this poem and i know its hard cuz ive been though this..
but ass long as you have them in your heart your never forget them..
*tears

Nice job! Very sad piece. It is so hard to lose someone we love. The pain stays with us. Keep your memories close.
Take Care Cindy

I like it

Nice poem...i've lost someone in my life too so i know the pain that you feel....you did a great job writing about it...

"I just want kiss your cheek once more,"

^^in this line you need to add the word to...
"i want to kiss your cheek once more"

good poem though.

Wow...great poem girly! it had a lot of emotion in it keep it up!
<3 tabi

So beautiful, Death is always a catalyst when writing poetry. You right so simple but so pure. i like it.

This is really good!
I'm sorry you have to go through this, but keep writing.
It will probably help with the hurt.

That was beutiful. i lost my grandfather a while back but i dont really remember him so i cant imagine what youre going through. i hope writing the poem helped. it was beautiful.

I really like this one Katy.
it's very sweet poem for your Nan. I'm sure she's happy looking down upon you.
The flow in the poem was good..and the emotion is very deep and portrayed quite well. great work! =] keep it up.
--Viola

I really like it! Its full of really strong emotion. Good Job :)

That poem was truely wonderful. i enjoyed the way you described everything. It was also very touching.
good job

Wow im sorry great poem :(

Wow really a great touching poem
well deserved 5/5
comment mine if u can
~TPC~

I really like this peom, I know how it is to lose someone like that. Anyway good job keep it up!!

-Josiah

This poems is propa sweet
very good =D

Its always hard to let go of those that you love so dearly. Treasure the memories and know that she is always watching over you. Very emotional write, beautifully written.

I love this poem...^_^ 5/5