Wishful Sinful

by Andrew Morton   Aug 17, 2007


I know that you can feel me
but can your lover feel you?
sneaking around the night
while he's laying in your room

but still we tip our glasses
sipping non-existent guilt
shattering a current love
that is already built

i've really come to hate
loving every part of you
we represent everything
that i said id never do

wrapped in a blanket of lies
while we battle the cold
feeling closer than ever
in the depths of both our souls

oh, dear wishful sins
in the battle of deception
what we're doing here
is an unwelcome reception

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  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely written....rhyme and flow perfect....

    i've really come to hate
    loving every part of you
    we represent everything
    that i said id never do

    ^awesome verse!....all the best, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Andrew
    This would have made an awesome challenge poem. The piece is still awesome.
    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Love this one.. third party is invovled. yeah pretty decent, your words kept the decent in here. good job! can't find any flaws...