Silently Screaming

by Perfectly Unperfect   Aug 17, 2007


Silently screaming
While outside I'm gleaming
Invisible pain
It's hard to contain

Tortured in silence
By hatred and violence
A layer of lies
Serves as a disguise

Feeling so hopeless
Why can't I control this?
No one can see
I'm just not happy

Silently screaming
While outside I'm beaming
Invisible pain
I'll have to contain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    I like this poem because I can feel it's turbulence, especially the ending. The Rhyme seems to work very well; short and sweet (Or bitter =\ whatever floats your boat.)

    4/5 for sure.

    Take Care.

    ~Richie

  • 16 years ago

    by Fay

    Woow this poem is great, I think u should of continued and extended it anyways great job, oh yeh and 1 spelling mistake lol 'feleling' did u mean feeling? anyways please comment on mine, Luv Fay :).

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