Comments : I am the girl

  • 16 years ago

    by Jakki HxC Self Mutilation

    ((SPEECHLESS)) Wow. Really emotional. I REALLY like it... 5/5
    -Jackie

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was absolutely amazing , a wonderful poem , very sad and full of deep feelings , my heart goes out to you, it was a well written poem, great write,, keep ot up, your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Nicely written lina..i love how you have this very unique style and form to what you write, keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by heather

    Wow, this reminded me a lot of myself. i mean not word4 word but basically. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aubrey

    OMG I love the poem.
    It reminds me alot of myself about a year ago.
    Until I met Ricky.
    But most awesome.
    Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by joe m durham

    Tahts nasty ur good

  • Dats a great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Zelly

    Hello, I found a deep connectionbetween your poem, and those of mine. This was truely a wonderful poem!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    This poem is amazing 5/5! Could really relate to some of it!

  • 16 years ago

    by chances

    This is a good poem, i can visual on how the person is feeling and what is going on

  • 16 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    I really enjoyed reading this one. :)
    i love you use of rhyme scheming.
    -Josh

  • 16 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    This is really breathtaking.... wow. none of my poems can even compare to this... wow... thats like the perfect word for it.... juss wow.... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Awesome poem lot of emotion in this one 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by I Love You Dominick

    This is so me except for the cuttin wrists part and insted i have scars on my arms of hearts for how many times i have really been hurt and i love this poem!!

  • 16 years ago

    by heather

    Ay girl..i can say im here 4 u..i feel ur emotion in ur words and i love ur freedom 2 express them. really...anytime..u jus wanna tlk2 sum1...im totally here 4 u. ill listen any time.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    Im the same way! I relate 100% && I think this poem was amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by MiRAy3

    0Mq! y0U HAD TH3 qUTz T0 SAy 3V3RyTHiNq i CANT! i JST R3AD TH3 ST0Ry 0F My LiF3! AND N0B0Dy 3V3N N03z....
    THAT WAS R3ALLy q00D! 10/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Wow that was just wonderful and amzing!!!

    It made me cry actually!!!! o.o

    Just keep up the good work!!!<3

    5/5
    DEF!!!<3

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    This poem was amazing!
    I can relate 100%
    This was beautiful && is what poetry is all about!

  • 16 years ago

    by BitterXSweetness

    I liked this poem. What I would suggest is that u should break it up in2 stanza's so ppl r more willing 2 read it. Cuz personally I was a little hesitate. But overall this was a very good poem. I loved the way that u ended it. The last sentence. I thought that was really good. The whole poem was just very good though.