Puppetted..

by janiL   Aug 19, 2007


We wander blindly
walking
ensnarled by confusion,
knowledge furthers ambiguity
reality materialize illusions..

we are all his
following
adhering to his every whim,
engaged in foolish duties
hollow emptiness within..

his shadow befalls
unnerving
no trace marks its wicked pang,
drawn to such insidious trap
lured by jargons of twisted tongue..

devoured by power
encompasing
all our actions binded,
rules still over our emotions
all decisions be demented..

chaos shrouds the mind
confounding
hiding the master of our strings,
we move oblivious to his power
we are puppets to this unwanted king..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow great poem and very beautiful word choice. The flow and the way words are strung makes thi sone a unique and caliberated poem :)

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, you should write a few more dark poems, cause you do it greatly. Another one with vivid imagery. The wording in this one is superb, and whole piece is so effective and captivating.
    I like its structure and the flow is excellent.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -his shadow befalls
    unnerving
    no trace marks its wicked pang,
    drawn to such insidious trap
    lured by jargons of twisted tongue..-

    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5

    voteD excellenT!
    luzaN

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