Aww this is sad. But it was ok.

Suggestion:
[How can you say goodbye,
To everything that we had?
Doesnt it hurt at all,
Or even make you a {little} bit sad?]
^^{tad} It would help out the flow a lot and would make it easier to read.

The flow in this poem made it kinna hard to read smoothly enough to keep going from line to line. Try taking out or putting in syllables in some places to help out the flow. You'll be amazed at how easy it can really be. =P Keep up the writing. 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

I loved this poem..the flow was really good..and i could feel the emotions put into it..especially since im also going through a letting go of someone phase..very easy to relate too..keep up the great work 5/5

Aww hunni, this is such a sad poem, and we all have to move on from something in our lives, whether it be a school, a place, a friends, a lover.. and no matter wht it always hurt if you dont want to let it go. I could relate to this poem, as could i relate to your other poem. I love your poetry its full of emotion. your flow wasnt as good as you other poem, but it was still good. great write.
5/5
xxx

Another good write Michelle. I could relate to this one as well. There's nothing much to say except great job! really liked it.
5.5
Ciao<3

This is a good poem.
I like the flow of this stanza,
"I guess I was asking to much,
When I asked if you would wait.
But I guess you were saying to much,
When you said you were here to stay."
keep writing
peace

This again is a very well written piece I love the way you use qestions to get the reader involved. I usally suggest ways of making your poetry better but but I don't see any here.

I think this could have been in the love section.
but the flow and rhyming was nice again strong words not as strong as some poems of yours i have read! but still a good write and a 5/5

I LOVE THIS ONE
I CAN SO RELATE, BUT UR MAKIN IT HARD FOR ME TO CHOOSE WHICH ONES ARE MY FAVORITE :)
5/5

~MZ.rAVEN

Oh wow i love how all your poems [well most of them] have something in them i can relate to! 5/5

Wonderful poem, at first...there wasn't quiet that much emotion but then, BANG!
This stanza set everything on fire...
I guess I was asking to much,
When I asked if you would wait.
But I guess you were saying to much,
When you said you were here to stay.

You're a wonderful writer!

Wonderful poem... i enjoyed it too...
It was a work from the heart

Keep on.. its brilliant

I like this poem, its deep and well written. Not to mention I felt what you were saying. The flow was good, the word choice was great, but I disagree with the concept! :P Its still good and gets a 5/5

I felt this way at one time as well, I eventually got over her and now I'm even more in love with the girl I'm with currently! :P So, don't think happiness is something you won't find, it just takes time...