Love is

by Hermosa   Aug 20, 2007


Love is hurtful, love is pain
love is everything you didn't expect
many say that love is great, that all you see is stars and hearts but they lie because seeing their love causes your pain.

Love is great if they love you back,
If you say I love you and he says I love you with all my heart,
When he calls you ten times a day and says I love ten thousand times in one date.

But if he doesn't say I love you back,
don't waste your time and don't break your heart soon he will find out what he lost when he sees you holding hands with your new love,
he will try to come crawling back but unfortunately for him it will be too late and all he will get is...your shoe in his Face!!!!!

I would love to know what you think about this poem i wrote it when i was younger was the first one i wrote.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    That one was so cute and actually very true =P The flow was fantastic as it had it's very own and once again the emotions were great also =) Another perfect 5 ^_^
    Rhea

    *by the way thank you for the great comment on my poem =) I really like that one of mine also and is one of my better love ones looking back lols*

  • 16 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    Nice piece... you know what? the most important thing is that the words came out within you... and that's the real thing... keep writing more poems and be the best that you can be...

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