Invisible

by QuietDreamer   Aug 23, 2007


Never seen nor heard
Blending into the background,
Fading into nothingness.
Mute in this lonely world
A black star in the night sky

Waiting to be noticed
Dreaming of recognition.
To absorb existence,
Longing to be someone

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  • 15 years ago

    by D Jon Versatino

    OKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK, this very good! keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    Awh, this is really good. I don't know why, but it's really making me emotional. =) Anyways, keep it up! =D

    -Taylor

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulLetdown

    Thats really good. keep writing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by crazyXCrunner

    You have a nice style. keep writing. and yeah, this poem is really easy to relate to.
    keep up the gr8 work!

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    This poem stated exactly how i feel most of the time! it's weird i long 4 atention but wen i get it i push them away. well any way i like ur styel of writing keep it up. 5/5

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