I ask the stars (my biggest mistake)

by December   Aug 23, 2007


I ask the stars
To keep you safe
As I am about to move on..
And make my biggest mistake.

I love you sweety,
But i just can not stay.
It's hard to love you,
And yet be pushed away.

I force my legs to move ..
I force my heart no to fall..
Although it's already in pieces..
The pieces.. I need them all..

Because every Little piece
Loves you with all it's existence..
No matter how far..
No matter how distance..
It just loves you,
And beats for you
Every litle second..
All day..

But no,
I can not stay.

Don't take me wrong.
I love you..
I truly do..
But it's hard to love
And yet receive no love from you.

I'll go
I'll make my biggest mistake..
Hoping that you will follow me..
No, it's not too late.

I'll be waiting
For you to arrive..
Hoping that my love for you
Can still keep me alive.

I love you.
Goodbye.

-- Waiting --

-- Still Waiting --

-- Forever Waiting --

-- Loving --

-- Still Loving --

-- Forever Loving.. you --

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  • 16 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Love the poem :)
    simple but yet special :)
    love the ending
    - waiting -
    - still waiting -
    - .... -
    I know exactly how you're feeling
    hard to love someone , when you're not sure anymore if he still loves you... It's just so hard to walk away from the person you love... Walking away hurts , but staying with thim also hurts...
    take care ! and keep up the good work
    :) loved it, and hope you can return the favor and check out my work.
    x x

  • 16 years ago

    by December

    Thanks :)

    I wish your friend good luck then.
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