To you my brother whom without i wuld die

by lost and incomplete   Aug 24, 2007


You came into my life uninvited,
I never knew you would change the way i am
you told me what you have been through
...you didnt need to...

You listened when i blabbed on about my worthless life
You helped when i wanted to let go
You helped me when i cried
...you didnt have to...

you told me your name and that of your mask
i told you mine though you didnt ask
you understood what i was going through
...you didnt have to...

YOU SAID YOU GAVE UP ON THE KNIFE
And i promised i would too and regain my strife
you said thats good and supported me
...you didnt have to...

you helped me plan my escape
you could ALWAYS relate to what i said or id done
...you didnt have to...

you listend when no one else did
you knew what was done
you cared when no one else did
...you didnt have to...

i always wanted a brother,
now ive found you i could have no other
ive met some on who actualy cares
someone who won judge
someone i can love

...you didnt have to....so Thank You...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Soulful Ensemble

    I'm the oldest of three brothers so I never knew what it was like for my younger brothers and I'll never know what its like to have a brother to look up to. Its a touching poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by SuicideNotes2Poems

    Not much to say
    it is great
    verry good job
    5/5 =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxy

    Awwwww, Huni thats so sad yet its a bit sweet in a odd way your saying thank you but yet your expressing your deep thoughts from inside you, SHout at me if im wrong but yeah..Its what i think Keep it up babe xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Honey

    Nice oneeeeeeee

  • 16 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    But you didnt did you ?? you didnt give up on the knife did you ... did you lie to me im beyond words