They lied-you passed on

by JayJ   Aug 24, 2007


Plz r8t my poem...plz.

It happened so fast, when God took you out of my life. All I did was blink my eyes. I never really knew you were gone at the time. They lied and said you were fine. I got home and my mom told me later on that night. I was only nine but I wish I could have saved your life. I would have told you to stop, if i knew you were going to go. That car came so fast you don't even know...

~*~This is about my friend Kristi, i watched her pass on when she was 11. I'm 17 now and I'm still upset about her loss...I actually visited her grave site for the first time a month ago...it was just so hard on me...
If you have lost someone you love and wanna talk about it I'm here just message me or email me at lucky13lover@yahoo.com Thank you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Munequita

    I completely relate to this i lost my cousin when i was 14 i'll be 16 next month n it still tears my heart cuz i wish there was something 2 do

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Very good really nice rhyming you had going on there :D xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by LiViNg To DiE

    Ya i know how you feel...
    my step sister commited suicide on january 26, 2007...
    she was only 34!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Wow excellente!!!! me amor!!! favoulus!!!

    well deep feeling and emotion on it...

    you got me!!!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Leah

    Aww, that's so sad. I've never experienced a loss of a friend before, so I can't fully understand what you went through, but this poem has given me all the honesty I need. I'm voting a 5.

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