This poem was phenomenal. It flowed really well, and the idea was really touching. I truly loved it. Really well done.!

Powerful piece...once again great choice of words...I'm liking your rhyming style.

Jay

I love this poem, you have a beautiful writing style! great work hun keep writin 5/5 n thnx for commenting on mine :)
xx

Aw wow, i liked this poem alot...it was filled with so much emotion and just flowed so smoothly

Brooke<3

Oh my god.
I know EXACTLY what thats like. I loved how you wrote tht, it was very very well written, please keep on writing. Im adding you to my favorites right this second.

I get this poem so well. .
i feel the same wayy.
&& it suckz. :[[
5/5.

This is really good. sad, but kind of inspiring too? haha

good job

I have to agree with Kelsey its an amazing poem it may have depth in it but it is really inspiring too. Me and my mum arnt that close -.- The rhyming was really well planned out keep it up xxx Much Love From Roxy

The fourth stanza looses the flow.

Other than that it's a beautiful peice. The flow was wonderful except for that one stanza. :) It's a powerful poem. 4.

Wow i love it good job

Think this poem is really good. and dont worry it didnt bug me that u asked.

keep up the good work ( :

I know just how that feels....its sad but really good....

I really like this poem i can really relate to it

Great work...

Great work...

Great work...

This brought tears to my eyes..

As I was reading this, I was thinking, how many people can relate to this..I know I can..

"I've Willed For Her To Cuddle Me,
Like She Used To Do
But The Cuddles Ended Years Ago, Why?
I Never Knew.."

^^ My favourite part of the poem, I found it to hold so much depth and power.

There is not a thing I would change about this, I loved all of it.

I'm glad you asked me to read some of your work, I have enjoyed your poems, and you're now on my favourites.

*-I've Willed For Her To Cuddle Me,
Like She Used To Do
But The Cuddles Ended Years Ago, Why?
I Never Knew..-* that part was so deep. so sad. so many people can see themselves through that. nice work, really ^^
lol im gonna read your other work . 5/5 totally.
=P

I love this poem its really good i know what a mother daught love is like i use to have with my mom to and i still do most of the time but this is a good poem

I liked the subject, as well as the tone of the piece. It was very genuine. Some of the lines I thought were a little awkward, like in the second stanza. I felt the'why' could've been put on the last line, and in the last stanza, I felt the 'my' could've began the second line. Apart from that, it was a great piece, with a good flow.

Brad