This is beautifully written it I could feel the destruction,you should be a writer :)

Very sad.. love it.. you show great emotion

Wow!!
wat a great read...!! 5/5
you know how to express emotion... i like it...

n hey thanks for the comment on my poem..:)

tkcare

Beautiful poem...check out mine leave a comment or just rate it...i will appreciate it

Very good emotion in your poem!
Love it!!

Danielle

5/5

Great poem

Very descriptive, i could just imagine the peace and laughter, then the destruction and pain. Amazing poem. It blew me away.

xx
Taegan Emily

I liked it so much..its sad n yet beautiful...5/5

Wow that was great,
i loved it,
5/5,
:]

Awesome job writting this you took me there iwth you the poem made me feel like i was in the moment

Stunning

Amazing!

Wow... this poem was great! very sad though but i liked it. great job.

Its really good.
i love it.
:)

Wow, great poem! It's beautiful. :) Good job.

Awts! So sad poem.. You make it well. Very well written. I will add this as my favorite. And i like the way you did this. You have your own style. Keep it up

Great description. it felt like i was watching the destruction, myself. although it's really sad, it's a great poem.