No-one cears

by SuicidePrincess   Aug 25, 2007


Laying pale and cold on this concrete floor
knowing no one cears anymore
beating and broken, stabbed to the bone
as they laugh and point in ease
all i do is pretend I'm growing wings
flying away from this fear i hide
...I'm really seard of bing Left behind
but now i can't walk for my bones are broken
my skin tore an my tears pour
now i know you all dint cear at all

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  • 14 years ago

    by andrea

    Hey its me again i think you need to work on it abit because you have the seard in it spelled wrong its spelled scard and you dint and thats spelled dont thats what you mean you have to have your spellings correct or it dont make sence and dont ryme good look andrea and stephen and sis kirsty xxxx

  • 14 years ago

    by andrea

    Btw you spelled cears wrong its cares just letting you know you have not done bad at all but you have mistake but if you want more marks and people to comment try spelling the poem with the correct words you get more marks and it becomes the best one out the lot good luck at getting the marks for your poem andrea and stephen from darlington xxxxx :)

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