Im commited

by Nuh   Aug 25, 2007


Listen dont speak,
Hear my words, years and years ive waited for this
Please dont leave
Lets keep this up
Lets not end it this way
Lets not ended in anyway

Im scared now
Please listen to my heart
Listen to my heart beat

I was the happiest guy on this planet
I was the luckiest guy on this planet
i was and still Grateful till this day to have known you

God created you so beautifuly
he made you his favorite of all of his creations in this planet

You make stars seem worthless to look at when i gaze at your eyes

Forget this world
i just want it to be me and you
forget my dreams for the future
o wait i take that back
because you are my future.

One kiss made me see our future
Please believe me

Im commited to love you

Im commited to have you

Im commited to keep you

Im commited to make you realize this is our time to shine between the stars no more hiding .....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Makenzie

    This is truly beautiful and so romantic. If this is a true story she is truly lucky.

  • 18 years ago

    by l t b

    Honestly , this is beautiful && very touching . i can really sense your emotion .

  • 18 years ago

    by Xx soulful poet xX

    Awww love it it's adorable 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kris

    A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!
    LOVE IT!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awww this is sweet...*smiles*....i really like this one...it was an enjoyable piece to read.

    "Lets not ened in anyway"

    ^^although in this line you spelled end wrong.

    and in the line where it says "God created you so beautifuly"

    ^^you left out an "l" in the word beautifully.

    but other than that this was well written.5/5

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