So strong and touching! ^^ God created you so beautifuly
he made you his favorite of all of his creations in this planet

You make stars seem worthless to look at when i gaze at your eyes
thats my fav part! its the one part that held all the emotion to meh. ^^ 5/5 i liked this! keep it up! =D

~*~skye~*~

Hay i liked ur poem i give it a 5/5 hay i mit like my poem HOT sex sean have a look and tell me wont u think

This poem is really well written i love it
xx

Wow i really liked this poem specially this part..

Im scared now
Please listen to my heart
Listen to my heart melody
I was the happiest guy on this planet
I was the luckiest guy on this planet
i was and still Grateful till this day to have to known you

...really well written babe love it xx

Aww! this poems so sweet!

Aisha
x

Lovely piece. :)
I definently love the structure of
the poem and where certain
words are put. Please comment/rate/read my poems. I only have two. THANKS!!
I give this one a 5/5!!

Awww this is sweet...*smiles*....i really like this one...it was an enjoyable piece to read.

"Lets not ened in anyway"

^^although in this line you spelled end wrong.

and in the line where it says "God created you so beautifuly"

^^you left out an "l" in the word beautifully.

but other than that this was well written.5/5

A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!
LOVE IT!!!!

Awww love it it's adorable 5/5

Honestly , this is beautiful && very touching . i can really sense your emotion .

This is truly beautiful and so romantic. If this is a true story she is truly lucky.