I will live one more day

What agreat poem, this is absoutly amazing
xox

This was pretty good...i like it... althought there was one minor mistake that i see....

"Release the the offer"

^^in this line you used the word "the" twice....but you probably just typed to fast or something. very common mistake.

other than that..this was well written.5/5

This was very good. thank you for your comment!