The Empty Girl

by katy   Aug 26, 2007


She is heartless,
She has no soul,
Her aura is the colour black,
She is a bottomless bit,
Broken into a million pieces,

What has she become,
After all the pain,
She is just a shell,
Half of what she was,

Like an angel,
Without its wings and halo,
She is nothing now,
Just to live with guilt,

What she did was wrong,
Karma got her back,
In the most painful way of all,

She manipulated,
She lied,
She stole,
She loved and left,
She laughed at the weak,
She bullied the young,

Life gave her a lesson,
A lesson which would leave her weak,
Till she grew old,
Six feet under will it only stop,

She is now known as The Empty Girl,
She does not know how to love,
Cursed for what she had done,
Over something so stupid,

As i look over her,
She sits waiting for tears to roll down her cheeks,
Nothing happens,
Emotionless,
She looks in the mirror,
Wondering where it all went so wrong,

Life is cruel but also valuable,
So treat it with respect and others,
Keep it near your heart.

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I hope you enjoy reading this poem it only took me about 25 minutes to write so i hope its ok thanks for taking a look xx

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  • 16 years ago

    by Suzi Ryan

    Good Good.
    sounds like my best friend will be soon really
    its sad.
    but it'll probably happen :(

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    OMG.. I am soooo sorry.. So, I re-read your poem..
    'She manipulated,
    She lied,
    She stole,
    She loved and left,
    She laughed at the weak,
    She bullied the young,'
    Was that part in there before..? lol.. I get it now.. ok, so not in need.. although even the weak; the cowards, and the bullies are in need.. Well done. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    A very powerful and inspiring message within your words.... well done once again Katy

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Very good poem hunn you have such a valuable lesson built into it 5/5 : ) <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    As i look over her,
    She sits waiting for tears to roll down her cheeks,
    "Nothing happens,
    Emotionless,
    She looks in the mirror,
    Wondering where it all went so wrong", I see these feelings being expressed in alot of poems. Keep on writing.

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