Unraveled

by Koreena   Aug 26, 2007


I study the pieces of my broken heart
that i hold in my hands
how could this be the source of love
it doesn't look like anything special

i notice they are unraveling
right before my eyes
a piece falls on the floor
there goes another memory

slowly they slip through my fingers
and i lose another time
of when i carried a smile on my face
a time when i cared

there goes the time at the beach
never to be remembered
oh and there goes the first i love you
it falls right on the floor

a memory of your face
drowns in a tear
i watch my life fall before my eyes
knowing there is nothing i can do

as time goes on i hold no more
this heart that was once whole
now its just an empty space
one that could never ever be filled...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    Your poems are just.... wonderful especially the sad ones cause I can relate to that really well....
    All of them seem to be heartfelt and very emotional.
    I wish I was just as good a writer as you!

    Nadia

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jose

    I've been there i traveled there many times great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Mish

    You are very good at writing. You speak from experiance so it seems. You write what you know, and the best writing comes from that. Thank you for the comment you made on one of my peices, it meant alot.

  • 16 years ago

    by Joe Rhoades

    Very good poems... it feels soo full of emotion

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