Can I?

by Reminders Torture   Aug 28, 2007


Here I am once again.
Heart filled with pain.
Broken and confused.
Misused and abused.

Can't pretend nor deny.
Take this anymore, Can I?
Left alone and betrayed.
Every second is been delayed.

Can I play this game of life?
What to do? Die or survive?
Can I take This pain?
I'm about to go insane.

Can I hold on for long?
Can I be more strong?
No hope, No choice.
Can you hear my voice?

Do you even care about me?
What's happening, Can't you see?
Should I let this go?
Or keep holding on?

Here I am once again.
Broken and confused.
Misused and abused.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "Here I am once again.
    Broken and confused.
    Misused and abused."

    Such a heartbreaking ending.. but as always, you've penned an amazing piece
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very effective and emotional, with very good choice of words. I like the rhyme scheme in this one, you did great job with it. Whole poem is very powerful, and it holds a lot of sadness.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a awesome piece you have penned. Very heartwrenching.

    Can I hold on for long?
    Can I be more strong?
    No hope, No choice.
    Can you hear my voice?

    These lines really touched my heart. Isn't that all we all need a hand to help us stand and someone to hear us.
    Excellent job on this poem.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Wow I liked the sadness and sorrow all along the masterpiece
    There are alot of questions unanswered that all of us ask

    My fave lines are;

    Can I play this game of life?
    What to do? Die or survive?
    Can I take This pain?
    I'm about to go insane.

    Keep writing,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by chelsea

    This is really sad.

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