Dear Daddy,

by Kira   Aug 28, 2007


Oh my [daddy],
You must love me so,
And I love you too;
I just thought you should know.

Last night, I
Did not have much fun.
You see, dearest [daddy],
I do not like your gun.

I know you told me,
That it was just a game.
But it was really late,
Last night when you came.

You reminded me of your love,
But I'm not sure if I told you mine.
Because suddenly you became very angry;
And [daddy], you crossed the line.

Don't worry, please,
I think I'll be okay.
I don't really understand though,
Why you've put me in this grave.

I hope it will be over soon
Because it really hurts to breathe.
I just thought you should know, dear [daddy],
My blood is suffocating me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mahlah

    Wow i love the way you put it and at the end it was amazing!! i didn't even see it coming

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Exciting, interesting and nicely penned...

    Nazeer