Unbearable News

You Swore You Loved Me,
But Then You Let Me Go.
I Suffered For Months,
Through Pain You'll Never Know.

I Had Just Taken A Personal Vow,
To Be Better To You,
That's When I Went Out,
And Bought That Ring Too.

When You Came Back From Visiting Home,
Was When I Was Going To Say.
"Baby, Would You Marry Me?"
Please Make Me your Fiance Today.

Instead I Received A Phone Call,
With News That Broke My Heart,
"Baby I Cheated On You"
Now We Must Part.

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