Darkness Within

by Isabella   Aug 30, 2007


In the moonless night,
I call for thee.
Behind the stars,
And beyond the sea.

I call for thee,
In the mist of clouds.
Where faces go,
To meet their Faust.

In the mist of clouds,
I call for thee.
Where ever you are,
Return to me.

I call for thee,
In the moonless night.
I need you here,
To return the light.

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  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    A real masterpiece. A real artistic talent you have. I hope you can share more.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like the rhythm in this poem, and the atmosphere is greatly created, somehow haunting. Whole poem has excellent flow.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -I call for thee,
    In the moonless night.
    I need you here,
    To return the light.-

    Keep writing, great job on this one.
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Isabella

    Thank you sooo much. :p

  • 16 years ago

    by Jose

    I love how you relate this poem with the galaxy with the moon it's so touching and so real very good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Isabella

    Thank you.
    The fact that you like my poem, meens a lot to me.
    I didn't ecpect the last line to come to me eaither, but it did. And I just went along with it.

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