Tears

by Bob   Aug 30, 2007


Tears went slowly down her face.
As if they were in a race.
She looked up to the sky.
And asked her Father why.
Her Lord was hanging on a cross.
The world to her was at a loss.
Tears

The sky soon began to turn to black.
She soon began to pack.
But she would remember what she saw.
She went and told all.
As for today we need to see.
All that was left for you and me.
Tears.

Her tears were turned to solid gold.
So that forever the truth could be told.
The Lord was inside her heart that day.
And that is where He shall stay.
He shall soon come again.
And then we shall have no more sin.
Tears.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I really liked your repetition of the word "tears". Repetition is really powerful when done the right way.

    I felt the the rhymes were just a little forced, but it wasn't terrible. I also thought the vocabulary was a little plain compared to your other poem, but it was decent.

    Her tears were turned to solid gold.

    ^^ That was the best line in the whole poem. I love the thought of tears turning to gold, it's just so.. exotic, I guess.

    Anyways, good job!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

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