YOur Lies will demise you

by musicMENDSbrokenHEART   Aug 31, 2007


*I'll not finish this one yet..let me think for the best phrases to be use here.......to be continued*

I gave you the dream I must have
To keep this drama working with faith
The faith I long for, The trust I cost
You just ripped them all out

Making Promises in front of me make me so special
But it was a trap for me to be one of your collection
and i hate it so much! I'm so stupid to fall for it
Just play with my emotions but don't expect to win this part.

The sweetest three words
Will demise you in the end
This Karma will hunt you like a ghost
A ghost from my broken dreams

To see you suffering in this Drama
Makes the Angels play the anthem
the Anthem of " Loathe and Love"

*hey guys..please tell me what you thing about this poem...i hope you have a great time reading this*

-Bryan.. <,3

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    It's very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    This is a lot better finished!! i love the emotion in this. i can tell that you are writing from the heart!!! 5/5 !!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Say sumthing about never again will i let u use me for i have finally gotten away or sumthing to that sort

  • 16 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Hey, it's finished, but i cant vote again, sorry! hey, like light in darkness said, i loved the emotion! great once again. . .
    rose<@>

  • 16 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Great wording, but finish it, it's awesome! lol 5/5x

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