by Kaz   Aug 31, 2007

Scars are deep,
Blood is dark,
Life is blank,
And your`e invisible,
But still there,
I sing with red tears,
Lifeless words,
With a step forward I take,
I lose a block of past,
Your soul is missing,
And so is my voice,
My will is there,
But my heart is gone,
My room is dark,
I rest in a corner,
Somewhere deep,
But still sing,
I fight a war against myself,
With no meaning,
After all your not there,
All are nothing but colorless,
In my corner I solve a puzzle,
Of life,
And death,
In the dark,
Trying to get it right,
With my blind eyes,
I still sing,


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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, I love this piece. It is so deep and touching, you expressed emotions excellently. I can relate to this amazing poem. Every line is truly effective filled with sadness and sorrow. This poem is also unique and it has powerful and vivid imagery.
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by susan kanavel

    I love this poem its great :) Great work .. very sad but its got much feeling and work put into it and i can put myself in tha place. Good job again

  • 16 years ago

    by Helen

    Such an intreging poem!!
    I must admite this is the first time iv seen a peom set out like that :) which made it even better :P
    its super amazing


  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    A woo-hoo @ this amazing piece.. indeed.

    the wording was absoultely awe-some..

    "..Scars are deep,
    Blood is dark,
    Life is blank,
    And you're invisible.."

    a truly superb start.. carried out very well..and yes, damn finely expressed.

    Great piece this.