The whimper of the whipped dog

by my demons   Sep 1, 2007


I wonder will they ever look back
will they stop and think
will they finally feel and hear
the whimper of the whipped dog
that kept coming back
until his legs couldn't take him any further.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    Thats sad... very emotional I don't really know how that feels... but something in that makes me pity you

    Nadia

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    Really different from what i have ever read.....thats a gud thing. great job and i will definately read more!

    mand x

  • 18 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    Very Good! i love it! tho it was short i defitnaly felt the pain and emotion used there!
    Great job! keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Deep poem. really good. 5/5

    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Oracle

    Well, i certainly felt the pain of this one. really tragic. i love your style. keep it up

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