Its short simple and absoulately AMAZING, i love your wording, and the emotion is great.
xx 5/5 from me

It was short, but down to the point, and it was really sweet. The wording was incredible through out the whole thing and the flow was just perfect. You really did a great job on this poem..The last 2 lines were penned just beautifully.

&& For the chacne to fall.
You might want to fix the spelling error...

But anyway, Great job...

5/5 for sure... ^_^ And Keep writting

Hey..beautiful poem..was really well written..I loved it..I love the wondering..
Good joB.

Excellent. all there is to it. definitely a 5/5

I think you did a really good job on this poem : ) the rhyming and flow made it enjoyable to read keep it up 5/5!

FANTASTIC...it flowed so smoothly and was worded beautifully, excellent job!

Brooke<3

Love it.
Keep up the good work.

Wow awesomely cute poem!!! great job!!

That was a great poem and I loved the flow and emotions flowing through it =) Falling in love is a wonderful feeling, treasure every moment of it sweetie ^_^ I'll look forward to seeing more poems from you in the future =) 5/5
Rhea

THIS IS A NICE POEM....KEEP WRITING THEM!!!!

THIS IS A NICE POEM....KEEP WRITING THEM!!!!

Very original and great ideas! i love short creative poems! 5/5

I loved it!! You're right in the end I would rather loved and lost than to never have loved anyone at all.

Short and sweet i like it 5/5

Love this poem!! the simplicity of only a few lines but the wisdom of a hundred years!! great stuff!!

Super cute! Especially like the opening.
5/5

xXx

Simple, short, and explosive. thot it was pretty g00d 5/5