I luv this poem, it kept me hooked until i finsihed reading it
i hope that i can find a guy like that one day :P
5/5

I like the end.. <3
you should read mine, its kinda similar. <http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=877805

5/5 **

This is a very sweet poem and i like it alot great poem

Aww what a sweet poem. I would definitely want those things in a guy. All those little things matter so much. I really liked this poem and how it was worded and I can tell it took alot of time talent and hard work, Keep it up, I gave it a 5/5. I'd LOVE it if you'd read some of my poems, and comment/RATE them, thanks so much!
Rachel <3

Awww wow you're very talented!
5/5

That was amazzing...Doesn't everyone want a guy like that? haha...I love it. <3

That was so cute! i loved it!

This might be a dumb ending but i was thinking something like..

maybe if im lucky
my dream will come true
maybe if im lucky
that guy will be you

just a suggestion, i wouldnt be offended in the least bit if you didnt like it. well, another great poem! I love reading these :)

Hey Tabi

This is a great poem i like the way you write..
And i think you would like my poems as well
So maybe you could check em out =)
5/5

Tabithia Noelle Wright

Personally, i like the ending. the poem itsself though was wonderful.

That was the best poem i ever read......... i think i found that guy caz i loves ever thing about me and i love everything about him