Who i am

by oksana   Sep 2, 2007


I am a person who will change
I'm a person who does not mean to hurt
I'm the girl that wants some one to change and care
I'm the one asking you not to stare

I'm the only one that stays loyal
I'm the one if you decide to cry ill be there
I'm there when your hurting and down
I'm there every single time

but your the one that brings me down
your the one that never stays around
your the only one that can hurt me and make me cry
your the one with all the power to make me hurt

all I'm asking is for you to stop and Liston
not to put more pain in my broken heart
you just didnt care
you just cant dare but hurt me and lead me on

thats who i am I'm the girl that will always have a broken
heart that will never heal always alone and down
asking him to come back and care

(story of my life tell me what you honestly think please!)

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  • 16 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Nice poem with beautiful but sad expressions to describe yourself.Powerful writing, keep it up!
    "but your the one that brings me down
    your the one that never stays around
    your the only one that can hurt me and make me cry
    your the one with all the power to make me hurt "
    ^^I loved this part.
    Take care and keep writing,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    I love your repetitveness about this poem , it was effective, like the meaning behind it. :)

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is definitly a good one. I like the poem in all means. You have nicely penned and it flows really well. Keep it up

    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    I know how you feel. i can realte to this..i think at some point we all feel this way. life is hard but life is beautiful too.
    the poem is very well written. you have put some very real and raw emotion in it. it's deep and somewhat sad but still amazingly well done. great work on this piece. keep it up! =]
    and Don't Give up just yet.
    --Viola

    p.s. thanks for your comment on mine. :)

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