Reflection

by Laura Ash   Sep 3, 2007


December 7, 2006

When you look at me
tell me what do you find
Is there nothing you see
Maybe a discomfort can unbind

Do you see someone perfect?
Faithful and true
I don't know if I mean it
When I say I love you

Maybe you see another
Someone that can do no wrong
But baby it hurts
I gotta say so long

You know what I think?
When I look at me
Someone in love
But so confused and unfree

Someone so happy
But hurting as well
There's something unknown
But you can hardly tell

Are all these feelings true
Or is it just an act
It does really matter
Because the mirror will just crack

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiveInMe

    I like it 5/5 and I can relate

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    "Are all these feelings true
    Or is it just an act
    It does really matter
    Because the mirror will just crack"

    ^^I can relate to this very much!!!...amazing write! 5/5 for me!

    Brooke<3